Asphalt Warlords
Excellent prose. Great sense of place and snappy dialogue that keeps everything moving while adding to the story. That's a hard thing to do; some writers fail at it miserably, but your writing excels where dialogue is concerned.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Thank you my brother!
I can give edits to the second half of the chapter, too (didn’t get). I just haven’t had the time recently.
by all means man. I like what your doin
Excellent prose. Great sense of place and snappy dialogue that keeps everything moving while adding to the story. That's a hard thing to do; some writers fail at it miserably, but your writing excels where dialogue is concerned.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Thank you my brother!
I can give edits to the second half of the chapter, too (didn’t get). I just haven’t had the time recently.
by all means man. I like what your doin