I really enjoyed this. You were able to capture so much conflict and emotion in a short amount of time. I love how creative this piece is. A favorite detail was when you wrote about Levitt's handwriting being sloppy on the tablet compared to his penmanship with an actual pen. Very well written story. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
This was such a fascinating and haunting read. The mix of science, grief, and infinite possibility gave the story such a heavy weight—I could feel Levitt’s longing and despair with every choice and every imagined life. The writing captures both the ache of regret and the fragile hope of what might have been, and it lingers long after finishing. Beautifully done.
I really enjoyed this. You were able to capture so much conflict and emotion in a short amount of time. I love how creative this piece is. A favorite detail was when you wrote about Levitt's handwriting being sloppy on the tablet compared to his penmanship with an actual pen. Very well written story. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
appreciate the kind words ser
This was such a fascinating and haunting read. The mix of science, grief, and infinite possibility gave the story such a heavy weight—I could feel Levitt’s longing and despair with every choice and every imagined life. The writing captures both the ache of regret and the fragile hope of what might have been, and it lingers long after finishing. Beautifully done.
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This wasn't even this months planned story. I appreciate the high praise